Apprentice

Neo is walking to his car, as he is rushed to by a man in black. The man in black was wearing a mask of a bloody, clown.

Masked man: I am huge fan of your work, May I ask you a question?

Neo: Sure you can, SECURITY!!!

Security runs to the parking lot and lifts the Masked man.

Masked Man: You can't take me away, I work here. I was personally hired by Trevor Goodnight him self. I will haunt your souls of you do not let me go this instant. I am the top light weight wrestler out here. I AM PATE97.

The security men let the Pate97 go and run in terror.

Masked Man: Thank you, as I was saying Can I be your apprentice?

Neo: Wow you really are something. I'll think about it, Are you really the top lightweight wrestler?

Pate97: Yeah, but that most fun part about this job is scaring anyone I can

Neo: We're might to change your robe, and your tacky big red shoes.

Pate97: Maybe

Neo: Walk with me

Neo and pate97 walk across the parking lot to Trevor Goodnight's office



NO LONGER USED

I like it but describe yourself more. Don't just say masked man, give details. And add some color, and maybe add more to the part where you say I work here. Because any stranger can say "I work here." Why would security let you go just because of that? Explain these in your RP. Make it detailed

EDIT - I like it better now lol. It's good. Is this your first fed?